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I don't know

It just hurts

Kill the monsters inside of me

Don't let them grow

Please, you're my only hope

 

I cant help but to yell

I'm out of my damn mind

What's that smell?

 Smell my skin burning, I'm in hell

 

Oh what to believe, what to believe

You or this self-destroying symphony

I'm shaking

God, save me

 

I'm just a fucking mistake

I cant go any further

I'm drowning in a salty lake

What is it like to be sane

 

To be at peace, in control

to feel no pain

I try to break free but the voices pull me back

I struggle and scream

But my self-worth are their snacks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Very short piece, but I like it.
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Amazing piece! :hug:
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BlackEcho-Guardian Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing <3 it describes anxiety almost word for word. completely relatable, and completely beautiful <3
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Partner-in-crime Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
These would be teriffic lyrics to a song!
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BlueDiamondSnow Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Really good. Been here. I appreciate this poem.
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LavaxRojkij Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
amazing <3
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thalath Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god! I can relate to this so much. This is a very good piece, definitely. :( Love it.
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RememberTheLost13 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
This is amazing work.  Need a hug?
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DontLetGo19 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You! Haha nah, that's what pillows are for.
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RememberTheLost13 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
You're welcome. 
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