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And Honestly I just feel all alone
I've lost all meaning in my life and I have no home
My insides are rotting from the inside to the out
If I could pull the trigger in my mouth a thousand times I would
So that I can kill every demon in my head for good

I love how the thorns of the roses hold my heart together
And how the pedals dry up the pouring blood; making it all better
I love how the lids of my eyes can hide  all pain that arrives
I love how ground catches me when I fall to my knees 
I love how the world is keeping me more dead than alive

What a wondrous thing is to have felt the light leave my eyes and the hairs stand on my skin when I had death on my mind 
Poem I wrote just tonight to let some shit outta my head. Hope you guys dig it!
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NykiiLynn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful, well written, amazing, relatable, wonderful, and I totally know how this feels.

well done.
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DontLetGo19 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, means a lot.c:
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CircleDreams Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Very poignant, sweet and sad. Very beautiful and well-written. :aww:
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Hauerslev Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
So... BEAUTYFUL! Happycry revamp 
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Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like the way you turned melancholy actions into almost the opposite. Like, the ground catching you when you fall, instead of you crashing to the ground or something :D
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DontLetGo19 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you La la la la 
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